Aneesa, the idea of a tunnel for charette 2 is a good start maybe you should have pushed the concept a bit further.In my opinion, the first one doesnt really talk about movement.... About the hatching work, don't hesitate to insist on the contrast to show the background,etc it's still a bit to shy at the moment....
Aneesa,
ReplyDeletethe idea of a tunnel for charette 2 is a good start maybe you should have pushed the concept a bit further.In my opinion, the first one doesnt really talk about movement....
About the hatching work, don't hesitate to insist on the contrast to show the background,etc it's still a bit to shy at the moment....